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9: The Story of 14- pt 1 pg 24

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Page 24: You Saved Me

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Dialogue:
*Real World nao! 8D*
5:
....
*thinking*: I'll check on 14...
I wanna make sure she's sleeping okay.

SFX: up
Mumbling.
More mumbling.
5:
?
14?
More mumbling.
SFX:
Shff
5: ...
Mumbling.
More mumbling.
14 (still asleep):
Mmg...
Get... away... Nng...
Rmg...

SFX: touch
5: 14?
14 gasps and awakes.
14 & 5:
...
14: Phew... Thanks.
5: ?
For what?
14: You saved me from the Beast. :thanks:
--

I just realized that there's a small plot-hole here -- it's unclear as to how 5 takes that last statement. Does he think she's referring to the day before when he and 2 brought her in, or that she's merely dreaming about him with a shining sword and a white horse (a small one) slaying the Beast like a dragon?

I dunno... I try not to go into the other characters' heads. This comic is really focused on 14 like the movie was focused on 9.

It's not really important to the overall story anyway.

Note: Please comment on these! People fave them, but they don't say what they like about it! I want to hear from you!!!!

9 (c) Shane Acker
Art and 14 (c) me -- don't steal it please.
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